keep refining and revising this poster - be sure to address these issues for final review:
watch the awkward negative spaces that get created with the rag.
remove the horizontal bars of >>>
MORE scale variation in the type for clearer content hierarchy and visual interest (i.e. percentages)
Go back and look at the previous sketch you showed me in class. While needing refinement and typographic attention, it had a dynamism that this restrained layout has lost.
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keep refining and revising this poster - be sure to address these issues for final review:
watch the awkward negative spaces that get created with the rag.
remove the horizontal bars of >>>
MORE scale variation in the type for clearer content hierarchy and visual interest (i.e. percentages)
Go back and look at the previous sketch you showed me in class. While needing refinement and typographic attention, it had a dynamism that this restrained layout has lost.
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