To start off you have made some huge improvements since your sketches. Congrats. Very interesting background image. I feel like the geometric shapes you are using for the dropdown, rollover, and container for the definitions and articles are working well, maybe I would suggest having a variation of line weight?? Your grid system I believe is very consistent and is working. You need to check your spelling over.
After looking at your psd comps and website I believe that the navigation rollover state could be defined more. It seems to me that in your psd comps that line gets lost with the background image. Maybe if you lower the opacity on the background image.....
In the dropdown menu the type could be defined more. It is getting hard to read and they feel very tight and close together.
In the definitions column, the read more after the definition could be brought out more. I didn't even notice it, also with that the column in the left corner, that green is blending again with the background. I would also try aligning that column with maybe other text or the box around the text.
I don't really feel like in your psd comps in the article page that the image you are using fits with your website.
Is ,user's experience, in the navigation the only one that drops down??
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To start off you have made some huge improvements since your sketches. Congrats. Very interesting background image. I feel like the geometric shapes you are using for the dropdown, rollover, and container for the definitions and articles are working well, maybe I would suggest having a variation of line weight?? Your grid system I believe is very consistent and is working. You need to check your spelling over.
After looking at your psd comps and website I believe that the navigation rollover state could be defined more. It seems to me that in your psd comps that line gets lost with the background image. Maybe if you lower the opacity on the background image.....
In the dropdown menu the type could be defined more. It is getting hard to read and they feel very tight and close together.
In the definitions column, the read more after the definition could be brought out more. I didn't even notice it, also with that the column in the left corner, that green is blending again with the background. I would also try aligning that column with maybe other text or the box around the text.
I don't really feel like in your psd comps in the article page that the image you are using fits with your website.
Is ,user's experience, in the navigation the only one that drops down??
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